DC Fan Art Club: Feedback Forum

Feedback Forum

@DCFanArtClub, I bring to you our official Feedback thread.

This is the place to post your works-in-progress and get some constructive criticism.

:star: Few Quick Notes :star:

  • Anyone can leave feedback, not just DCFAC members. If you’ve got working eyeballs, you’ve got the potential to help our artists.
  • Rude, nonconstructive remarks will be smited by @CynicalPink. This is a safe space for artists to grow and improve without fear of that kind of negativity.

Thanks to everyone who participates!

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Ok so I want feedback on this piece, any criticism I’m fine with, and I’m wondering what kind of background, and other robins should be placed

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Just from Art Appreciation classes, would consider a Robin or something else to draw your eye to the upper right to create an inverted pyramid.
But, really like what you’ve done.

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Those are my favorite Robin’s that’s a very nice drawing.

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I’m also thinking a Robin in the top right, with possibly another slinking in the lower left.

Backgrounds… what about the inside of an abandoned and delapidated circus tent?

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How can I make this better? I don’t know what I don’t like about it, but I don’t like something. I’m also guessing 50% of you know what this is from?

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Ok I’m just trying to help , but you positioning of the robin it a little off I made this quick 30 second demo to show you what I mean I hope this helps.

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@AnonymousHQ Vicious is way better at this but in the same vein…

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I think narrowing her jaw would help. I cannot draw with my finger + phone. :scream: hope what I’m trying to describe comes across

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Thanks @CynicalPink!

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Much better!

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so I’ve got another one in, but what pose do you think could work in the top right. I’ve been trying for a while, and can’t get it right.

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@AnonymousHQ Glad that helped! Nice work!

@loganmichaelphilips Would it work to have a Robin that’s leaping directly at the viewer? This isn’t really the angle I wanted, but I couldn’t find any people/critters going straight for the camera

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:joy::joy:I think you mean something like this


And I’ll try and see what I think

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@loganmichaelphilips the fact that you were able to whip out a robin that looked just like that cat killed me. I’m so done. :rofl::rofl:. And it’s coming along amazing. Keeping my fingers crossed you find the perfect pose !

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Can anyone help me with this guys eye? I’m not sure how to get the angle right or make it look like theres not an empty socket?? Thanks so much!

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I can’t do this too well from my phone, but you just gotta angle his jaw more outward and then add a slight slant to his eye

My lines are exaggerated too much, but that’s the gist

Ps: really doesn’t look bad at all if you don’t want to take the chance with erasing that much :+1:

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So kind but the eye really bugs/creeps me out :grimacing:

Thanks boss! That makes perfect sense! I will attempt since have plenty of time before posting is due. :crazy_face:

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I made this for my my for Mother’s Day, I messed up Martha Wayne’s face

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I don’t think she looks bad at all. Part of what I like most about this is every mom has distinct features

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I’ve been working on a Robin costume and I wanted to do something a little unique for his symbol. So I’ve been playing around with it, trying to redesign it, but also trying to make it reflect other Robin symbols. I wanted to get the opinion of some fans for which of these is the best.

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I kinda liked 1 as well, but worried it would be harder to make out the gold against the red. Hope you show us the whole costume when it’s finished!

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